<~>3 Jan 2003

yes.

"Scarlet bubbles floating in the patterned air
Dancing their woven path without a single care"

this screams his age; one does not need to look at his profile to confirm it. as for what he was trying to do, well, this stepping stone is not so wobbly as some that i have broached, and my jeans are no stranger to cold, mucky waters.

keep at it ranger. listen to the ones who say you fail--they are the ones who will get your ire to where it needs to be to make yourself leaner, better, stronger.

as for this poem: you knew what you meant; say it with half the words; make ME, the reader, question its existence. k?