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The Fire Burns Bright (an Ode to Kaolin) (Ode) by <~>

Raise your Voices! Raise a Glass! Nentwined! Nentwined! Has risen to the Task! As the New Year broke, He fell to his knee He offered a Jewel, His Eyes said, "Please" She doubted at first That he was in earnest But the Fire in his Heart Burned bright, so she turned and Reflected! Returned! Refueled his Glow! She sparkled and shone-- Her Eyes told him so: His Bride she would be! His Bride she would be! And so, at Midnight On the First of the Year With a new Era breaking Both shed a tear Of Joy! Of Hope! Of things that Would Be! Their Hearts united In loving decree A Promise made, A lifetime to Share A future Together A Love to hold dear So, Raise your Voices! Raise a Glass! Nentwined and his Love Their Hands will make fast!

<{Baba^Yaga}> 2-Jan-03/9:39 PM
S7. L3, W1, typo kiddo
yes indeed. thank you, both for 'getting' me, and letting me 'get' myself. i honestly, consider this place my second home, and kaolin, i'm grateful to you and jealous..thank you both.
and congradulations, if you guys
are ever in my forest, ever! don't be strangers, let me be your host, for once(i'm also convinced there's a movie here, in the making) if we could only find d.a.bastard eloped with settle, again, while me and babbit were out hunting for elk and beaver, love is tough on the sole.??




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