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flying home (Free verse) by daniella

Gathering on the wing where windsheer takes me, the frost thins. From these holes I sense the distance and know the hour arrives. Her head resting in my lap, I hope to stroke her thoughts and take them with me when I return. Upon that wing, I wish to send her. Into a horizon better still, defined.

emeraldeyes 29-Dec-02/3:33 PM
this is the first free verse that i've read AND loved!




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