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The Coming Light (Free verse) by poetandknowit

Now with the moon in retreat the sun can again move forward stretching light across the sadness left by the last streaks of autumn, warming the minutes of tricked time, when the late afternoons of this new winter grasp the land, hang against these mountains in the city backdrop just a little longer each day before falling to darkness.

poetandknowit 28-Dec-02/11:10 AM
You are telling me you have been reading my comments on this site now for more than 4 months and you have not figured out my tendency to exaggerate for effect. I must go ride my bike, broken pinky or not.




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