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Things (Free verse) by Quarton

Off the assembly line they role, bicycles and washing machines, lawn mowers and airplanes; manufactured in an endless variety of inanimate things. But when did a chicken or steer, a lamb or a hog, become merely an object, an unfeeling and unaware thing? Factory farming, growth hastened to maturity--hormone creativity; unnatural lives confined--defined, from birth to ignoble death. Amidst the mayhem of the cutter's knife, animal cries--bewildered eyes; maximum profit mentality--reality; indifferent to the difference between a lamb and a shovel-- a bleat or a scrape. Newborn calves isolated--violated, destined to die when three months old, throats slit hanging upside down. Unintended mercy--culpability; veal all that remains to justify the pain. Does the tender pink flesh lessen the suffering, do we compliment the chef? Inhumanity served medium rare. Animals possess rights beyond human selection or rejection; though we as a species create misery in denial of shared presence--essence; with impunity and separate from the system we all share. Our common bond trivialized--unrealized as by virtue of no virtue; altruism viewed with open disdain--in vain. While the cruelty continues unabated--unsatiated tho all life related; animals alive and sentient yet demeaned and mistreated, abused and confused, crying out thing--machine.

Quarton 27-Dec-02/11:00 PM
How thoughtful of you to read and comment on my poem.
The fact that you gave it a zero clearly demonstrates
the extent of your biased bullshit. Critique my poems
as often as you wish and make comments, good or bad.
But save the zero for yourself.

I must admit to a chuckle when I read about TN and the
"United Sportsmen of America." Regarding the generic
mantra, it goes both ways...."I feel like"..."originality",
"sap", "tackles the subject", the infamous "step away"
etc...ad nauseum




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