Replying to a comment on:

Godly (Free verse) by brazen

I created this life In the image I wanted to be Built it over many years And never rested a day I gave to my family I gave to my friends I gave my all To the deciples of my kin. I held on with patience With love and forgiveness and fear But now those whom I've helped Have lost their faith in me So suprise knocks them down Wrath from my gentle fists Famine from my soft spoken mouth Until the suffering is past Those standing the judgement Soothe their wounds with the past Assure them that my anger can't last And start again from scratch.

brazen 25-Dec-02/9:47 PM
you know, honestly...i went back to my actual notebooks for a date on this. it was about 2 years ago. i'm good. now i direct my anger and rage towards the everyday idiots i run into at work.




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001