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The Coming Light (Free verse) by poetandknowit

Now with the moon in retreat the sun can again move forward stretching light across the sadness left by the last streaks of autumn, warming the minutes of tricked time, when the late afternoons of this new winter grasp the land, hang against these mountains in the city backdrop just a little longer each day before falling to darkness.

poetandknowit 24-Dec-02/12:43 AM
Considering the poets you read and your ignorance about the state of American poetry and the enormous chip you carry around I would really not be so proud to state an opinion. Becase they are a joke. You revealed your cards. Stan Rice. hahahaha. You have all his books. hahahaha Is there a problem with having an education and not relying on a fast food company for a fucking paycheck, brig boy? Man, I hope you succeed in soap operas, because you are going nowhere else with the talent you have and the big bad GED. Except maybe Kmart, when the looks fade and the agent stops calling. Yes, 8 bucks and hours for you. But it will be worth it. Because when you die, you will finally be recognized for genius. hahahahahahah.




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