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A christmas thought (Free verse) by keatsImnot

You can feel it now, it's in the air Christmas time is drawing near. A time to sing a shout for joy. In Bethlehem was born a boy. A child to change our life, our way. O let's rejoice that happy day. But now the reasons long been lost. At Christmas time we count the cost. We stuff ourselves with food and drink. Of Jesue Christ will little think. Around our World so far from thought. The children starve their lives so short. So remember please on Christmas day. A thought for those so far away. You'll fill your glass, shut off your mind. It's Christmas time, God bless mankind!

keatsImnot 21-Dec-02/1:20 PM
It was a mistake deleting your comments, I wished to reply to you but alas pressed the cross. This poem is somewhat immature, but I was twelve when I wrote it. I appreciate your comments, and as you probably understand from a comment I addded to one of your poems "child of my anus" I hold your work in high esteem, to have munificent dark angel critise one of my humble offerings, would be be akin to Carlos Santana giving me some advice on my guitar playing. I assume you are an American, so let me add the above is written without irony.

Yours in Poetry

keatsimnot.




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