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Only you (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly

One look from you lets me know I'm ok We talk on the phone alost everyday You saved my life though you weren't there What kept me going was the fact that you cared You make me wake up to look around and see This worlds not so bad and how happy I can be I feel alive when I'm with you And you make me smile even when I'm blue People think we're lovers even through we're just friends We have a strong relationship so strong it never bends I'm not so sure what it is about you The only logic is I know its true Down the road I know it will be better if not the same Cuz in my heart forever is where you'll remain

Caducus 16-Dec-02/5:03 AM
Now, this is more simplistic and engaging than the others, it flows nicely and is undemanding in a good way, take a 7 sugar




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