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To Kiss (Free verse) by Jody Conn

A languid kiss on swollen lips A glistening pouting flower This honey- scented hooded bud I savor at any hour Like wonderful wine with flavor divine Such moist and marvelous bliss All desires and dreams fulfilled This treasure now mine to kiss jc062001

Ranger 13-Dec-02/4:23 AM
So, horus8 and poetandknowit, care to explain the problems with this? Constructive criticism is part of what this site's about.




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