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A hard life (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

From pristine shelter into stoic virgin vastness Travelling through the whiteness of time standing still. To tunnel into an individual world and sit staring jigging. A pull. Finger tracing the hash marked flesh and freedoming. Striking bundling returning To his sweet prune and raisins that use Nothing more.

<~> 11-Dec-02/10:19 PM
it is a disappointing book. it starts out well, but in the end, loses itself in itself. it is too much genius for its own good. but it is a fast read.




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