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Haiku (Haiku) by INTRANSIT

Seventy degrees Reservior reflects starlight Fish hours equal human

INTRANSIT 11-Dec-02/5:20 PM
that's what I was kind of thinking, too much stuff. Am I anywhere near a true haiku? I need to check because no sense in trying an I/P if I haven't gotten a simple haiku right. right?




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