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this tuesday morning
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teacup
The street shines with the winter rain Each splashing puddle mocks my pain. I want to dash out of this place But I know I'm losing this race. The sky scowls and I want to cry In this bus stop I think I'll die.
god'swife
1-Dec-02/9:18 AM
Is it 'but I know' or 'because I know' Change the last line.
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