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Sent from Above (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly

From the first time that I saw you you spun my world around You were the most beauiful creature that I have ever found I had to get to know you get into your soul Cuz you gave me the strangest feeling the feeling of being whole The first words we spoke were small and few But that didnt matter to me because they came from you Time passed and we spoke move and soon we fell in love And in my heart I knew it was true this love was from above But right now we are apart and I feel so alone Everythings feels cold and bare nothing feels like home "Its only a break" you continue to say But I'm still so scared that it will end this way I want you to know that I really love you And that there is nothing nothing that I wouldnt do To make you happy and give you love Because I really feel ours is sent from above.

Tintagiles 29-Nov-02/7:20 PM
Wow, avoided to actually use the word 'angel'. You get a point for that.




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