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Emptiness (Free verse) by Jagang

The emptiness inside me, grows more and more each day. This loneliness I feel, will never go away. The pain in my heart, is begging for release. One slash with a knife, and all my pain could cease. Should that be the way to go, a knife blade through my vein? Or should I try to find a gun, and put a bullet in my brain? It doesn't really matter, nothing ever does. No one will even remember, the person that I was. I lift my arm, and make a fist. I draw the knife, and slash my wrist.

razorgrin 20-Nov-02/1:28 PM
I re-read this to see if it was as bad as I remember. yep. you know, if you killed yourself, no one would miss you.




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