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I Stand Mesmerized (Free verse) by abbaslittleclingon

On top of a huge rock cliff I stand in Breathtaking outdoors and look down upon a Spectacular series of waterfalls Roaring water tumbles with tremendous Strength,powerful liquid diamonds make their way To the perpetually welcoming Arrow Lakes Surrounded with luscious trees in an array of Shady greens Groups of deer gaze at me from a distance Sporadic colors of moss and lichen thrive on the Majestic rocky cliffs Sun beams upon my naked back form sweat upon my Darkened skin, turning my face towards bright Warmth,a few lacy clouds share their imagination With me,a satisfying mist fills the air I breathe Everywhere are scattered Flowers,indianpaintbrush,buttercups,dogwood, wild Roses possessing an intoxicating aroma,mesmerized My soul doth long to view the beauty of my home.L.G-O.

poetandknowit 19-Nov-02/10:43 PM
1. my city established 1876. Centennial State. Columbine, flower (and historic shooting event that inspired a 5K and a new license plate). Bird, Chrsitof. I live in the heart of it. I am less than 1 mile from a store that sells at least 15 brands of condoms.
2. Which pic. Major windburn in the bike race. Did I mention how much pain I was in. You would not believe.

(It is not last call or anywhere near it here).

3. i don't understand.
4. I hate everyone here, except you, of course





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