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I Stand Mesmerized (Free verse) by abbaslittleclingon

On top of a huge rock cliff I stand in Breathtaking outdoors and look down upon a Spectacular series of waterfalls Roaring water tumbles with tremendous Strength,powerful liquid diamonds make their way To the perpetually welcoming Arrow Lakes Surrounded with luscious trees in an array of Shady greens Groups of deer gaze at me from a distance Sporadic colors of moss and lichen thrive on the Majestic rocky cliffs Sun beams upon my naked back form sweat upon my Darkened skin, turning my face towards bright Warmth,a few lacy clouds share their imagination With me,a satisfying mist fills the air I breathe Everywhere are scattered Flowers,indianpaintbrush,buttercups,dogwood, wild Roses possessing an intoxicating aroma,mesmerized My soul doth long to view the beauty of my home.L.G-O.

poetandknowit 19-Nov-02/10:12 PM
Silly rabbit. Poetry is not to be judged as one person being better than another. It is from the soul, the deepest form of expression. We are all one poet, one word. We are all in the same boat cast at sea, lost, waiting for a downed tanker to break. Now, you two take hands. Kiss and make up. Send me the picture for a good bathroom tug. And I do not know what I am talking about becasue I have no pictures but the one's I create in my head. Do you not live in the suburbs?




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