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I Stand Mesmerized (Free verse) by abbaslittleclingon

On top of a huge rock cliff I stand in Breathtaking outdoors and look down upon a Spectacular series of waterfalls Roaring water tumbles with tremendous Strength,powerful liquid diamonds make their way To the perpetually welcoming Arrow Lakes Surrounded with luscious trees in an array of Shady greens Groups of deer gaze at me from a distance Sporadic colors of moss and lichen thrive on the Majestic rocky cliffs Sun beams upon my naked back form sweat upon my Darkened skin, turning my face towards bright Warmth,a few lacy clouds share their imagination With me,a satisfying mist fills the air I breathe Everywhere are scattered Flowers,indianpaintbrush,buttercups,dogwood, wild Roses possessing an intoxicating aroma,mesmerized My soul doth long to view the beauty of my home.L.G-O.

god'swife 19-Nov-02/10:05 PM
Hello, she's no longer picking fruit either! Or perhaps there's a govt. sponsored program were they hand out laptops to migrant workers. "Sorry no health -care or schools but here's something to keep you 'connected'. She 's got a website. I never said anything derogatory, well expect of course that you don't know what you're talking about. Like that's ever stopped you before. Anyway, I'm just having fun. Aren't you? One Country is the time Eddy and I held hands cause we were square dance partners. The rest of the time you're throwing sand. So tell me Herr Doktor, in your honest opinion who is the better poet, our new friend here, or me?




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