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I Stand Mesmerized (Free verse) by abbaslittleclingon

On top of a huge rock cliff I stand in Breathtaking outdoors and look down upon a Spectacular series of waterfalls Roaring water tumbles with tremendous Strength,powerful liquid diamonds make their way To the perpetually welcoming Arrow Lakes Surrounded with luscious trees in an array of Shady greens Groups of deer gaze at me from a distance Sporadic colors of moss and lichen thrive on the Majestic rocky cliffs Sun beams upon my naked back form sweat upon my Darkened skin, turning my face towards bright Warmth,a few lacy clouds share their imagination With me,a satisfying mist fills the air I breathe Everywhere are scattered Flowers,indianpaintbrush,buttercups,dogwood, wild Roses possessing an intoxicating aroma,mesmerized My soul doth long to view the beauty of my home.L.G-O.

god'swife 19-Nov-02/6:10 PM
Whether picking fruit or cleaning up after rich people, peasants are peasants. I guess weez inside-nigga's, cuz weez pretty an maza' shur dun liked it when we sat on his knee, I use to hike up my pettycoats shuffle my feets and sing

Hot tamales and they's red hot yeah I got 'em for sale
Hot tamales and they's red hot yeah I got 'em for sale
One for a nickle and two for dime
I would sell you more but they ain't none of mine.
Hot tamales and they's red hot yeah we got 'em for sale!

Then mazza' would pats my head and give me a hunk of pork jowl. I'd give it to mama and she'd flavor up d' greens with it. Ew-wee!!! What the fuck do you know about how I grew u




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