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Train (Free verse) by oohv

Train arrived, Junction contrived. Sulky connotations lurking beneath eloquent phrasing. Don't try and fool you are dealing with the master Tool box I made for myself and all others to hide Against the wall that binds and grinds Beans of delight encased within the glassy struck faces Of pale faced, anorexic, madams galavanting Across the bridge of my indecision To sulk into a watery grave dug with gnarled fingers Where the roses prick the tissue paper skin of a fine, Dandy apple red machine of destruction to spawn the Insurrection of a Pokemon herpes virus with all the obvious signs of a global epidemic spanning all ages and races need to gather together to stop the hate that kills mothers, fathers, and all the best too much of this violence solves nothing like an opium high Holmes asking for deliverance from an unforgiving God treating the masses like a blue plate special ready for the best treatment money can offer you only my kidney sir because my boss laid me off, my wife left, and my son robbed me of all known possessions begin to own you like a cancer stricken lab rat fighting for PITA representation for taxation of the poor, the rich and famous lives we wish we only had a cent to get by, get on, get gone over the rainbow to find Oz or maybe knife a leprechaun to steal his gold strains ribboned throughout the American flag torn and strewn in front of the new generations spanning generations to complete this insidious indoctrination of isolated white Republicans adorning the land of the bereaved with decorated, gold encrusted fecal matter they tell us to eat like the Oil we are running out of and the Faith we no longer have.

razorgrin 6-Nov-02/6:14 AM
Ienjoyed it. not much for srtucture, but enough great images to largely make up.




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