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#15 (Haiku) by mikejedw

old telephone pole ensnared by creeper and wire-- my elm's poor cousin

hoopoe 21-May-02/9:26 AM
hmm
this one doesn't do it for me.

I guess i don't feel that way about the telephone pole, maybe an adventurer; so the knot at the end slips ...




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