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The wonderful happy relationship between two wonderful and caring people (Free verse) by Dark Angle

Heather was a girl the kind that told you that she loved then she fucked your friends but only told you that she hugged well... Well i didnt mean it then when i told you i loved you so but i guess its to late now you'll never know oh and by the way did i mention i hate your guts you stupid bitch cunt god damn little slut when i think of all the times i spent thinking of you i just wanna fucking kick myself right in the god damned fucking head what a waste of space you take up on this earth if i could i just might burn you alive but all this doesnt matter and i dont really care because im over you now bitch REALLY I FUCKING AM!!! GOD DAMN FUCKING DAMMIT!!!

felixthecat 28-Oct-02/4:01 PM
very very very funny. I've never laughed this much while reading a poem before. Not that I actually laughed 'out loud' this time either, but I did what I seem to do when I sit in a room by myself and then read something funny: which is to laugh visibly but silently, probably giving the impression that I'm trying to cough up a furball.




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