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Midnight Dream (Free verse) by Katie

A feeling of lust, Such ecstasy, They way I felt, With you touching all over me. The moaning and screaming, The feel of you inside of me, Is this wrong? But how could it be, When it felt so right, You on top of me. Just you and me, Our body entangled, Our tongues dancing the tango But I mustn't let my imagination run free, For this was only rp, An Internet relation, Just words on a screen. Nothing more than a midnight dream. (rp=role play)

god'swife 21-Oct-02/11:08 PM
Yucky. That is so totally gross!!! How could you even think of role-playing with someone on the internet? I mean, they could be a pervert or something, like maybe they own a laundromat called sudsorama, and they steal little girl's knickers from hampers when noones looking. Or worse you could be getting off with some old prof who touches his weenie while he's standing up behind that wood thing that holds his papers and stuff. Crusty residue on the sleeve of his tweed jacket. Ewww. Or it could be an lady whos so fat she doesn't leave the house and pretends she's a dude.




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