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The Power of Green (Free verse) by Tascobar

Sitting here, looking at the smoke It feels that I can't hold on Racing, beating, smiling up to choke. Serene, serendipity, metabolic happenings My torso as if under external control.

Tyriana 16-Oct-02/6:44 AM
wow, a druggy-poem. not that that's ever been done, and a lot better.




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