nentwined9 Oct 2002

"has now gone" and "before too long" scan better without the "now" or "too".

I think instead of "they'll be no more fighting" "there'll [...]"?

I think "try and sue" would work better as "try to sue" -- more proper and as such fitting the tone of the teacher, even if you're trying to let (him?) degenerate. All in all, a beautiful piece. :)