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Friendship (Other) by Blue Magpie

As happy as a snowflake upon a snowman's nose, I laugh with you and love the way your beauty grows, within me like a sunrise to kiss the new-made day, coloured now in gladness among the games we play. Your soul so wisely gentle your heart profoundly strong your mind in orchestration sings out your life a song. Your spirit weft with wonder flies free on fronds of light. Yes I loved you in the morning and I love you still tonight.

poetandknowit 9-Oct-02/9:25 AM
There are good poets here, but it is a matter of patience. I like this, especially the last stanza and the last lines. The tone shift from stanza to stanza makes it work, although I am not sure the first line is such a happy little image. I know it is supposed to be light hearted, but a snowflake hitting a nose, well, usually melts. I




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