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Truths (Free verse) by Nicholas Jones

Sometimes I can be honest with myself And look for explanations in my past - No socialist commitments can destroy My guilt at being of the middle class. Some people dig for coal far underground While I write footnotes that are thesis bound I contribute no economic gain, Secure nothing for the workers by hand or brain - I know the fourth clause always was the best But joined the party after it was lost.

limonade 4-Oct-02/8:46 PM
The essence of the poem is good, but the expression could use some work.




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