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#7 (Haiku) by mikejedw

Heavy morning mist inhaled, beading on my arms-- not rain, not a cloud.

anonymous 13-May-02/9:14 AM
i realize that haiku doesn't always have to be 5-7-5...that there are other syllable combinations that may be applied but should always be 17 syllables or less. You've got 18 here. How bout: Heavy mist at dawn/inhaled and felt on my arms/not rain, not a cloud. Because it's really so beautiful.




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