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The Good Old Days in New Orleans (Haiku) by cobalt

it rains and rains and everything's underwater except the bodies

balthazar 27-Sep-02/1:31 PM
gruesome? hmm. all the graves are above ground so they DON'T get flooded (as NO is below sea-level). THAT would be gruesome! this is really nice. simple, where everyone else, especially me, fails in the haiku.




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