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he is dead
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roses are read
he is dead, his blood spilled silly, sporadic puddles of his life, the street drinks it in. i did not know him, god, who was he?
nentwined
12-May-02/8:32 PM
a nice thought, but wasn't portrayed as well as it could have been. there's not enough structure/flow for me to feel.
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