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passion (Free verse) by lexicon

Drunk emboldened whispers drive lovers together Me : love, You: lust Cries and Moans. Arose still sex-inebriated but this lazy goddess wants everything easy: Time the world celebrated passion. Place existential beauty after fuck drive.

nentwined 12-May-02/8:24 PM
interesting. I'm impressed with how awkward you made almost every single grouping of words. But I can't say I find that pleasant.




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