Replying to a comment on:

Morning conflict (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Longing for my jump start yet resisting, I feel your pull. I will not give in! Iwill grind you into powder! You retaliate by grasping my nostrils with your brutal perfume. I attempt at turning tables and scald your remains. Saturated, you leak into the urn and I am triumphant. Alas I am not. For I drink from thy urn.

morffrom 26-Sep-02/5:44 AM
Very enjoyable and thanks for the nice things you said about my clock, it means a lot to me. Sometimes it is all just tock! See part 2 just published-oh 10/10 by the way.




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001