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If I'd Never (Free verse) by PawnedTidal

If I'd never felt Your gentle touch, Maybe being apart Wouldn't hurt so much. When I was with you, There was nothing else. But now I'm left here, All by myself. If I'd never kissed Your sweet, soft lips, Maybe I wouldn't feel Quite so alone like this. I knew the day would come When you would say good-bye. But I never dreamed How much it would make me cry. If I'd never fallen asleep Staring into your beautiful face, Maybe I wouldn't be longing For your warm embrace. Even though you're only A few hours away, Every second seems like Forever and a day. If I'd never held you Tightly in my arms, Maybe I wouldn't be So mesmerized by your many charms. It won't be long Until I can see you again. I hope it can be Just like it was then. If I'd never met you... If I'd never loved you... I'm glad I'll never have to know Just what I'd do.

*Lyrisick* 23-Sep-02/4:19 PM
I agree with livingcanvas,I hope you were writing this out of thought and not experience. I too have read all of your poems and the respect is mutual. Until we read again.....




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