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Lazy Pindaric Ode Blues (Ode) by pete

The Lazy Pindaric Ode Blues so comes something out of nothing so comes a fire from the heavens' void here comes a conclusion that's hard to avoid here comes an ending deja-vued letting the spoken word intrude on your mind you may find it rhymes sometimes cosmic force-field study may yield something unexpected, something unknown something to play with, something to be thrown to the dogs of war, to the hate-machine .............grrrrrrrrrrrr............. were it not so oh well, hey-ho that's life this strife tree of eden snakes - don't feed 'em that unleashes every kind of grief the ending don't depend on your belief or on your philosophy, or on the words of some vatican moron and so it goes this poem's close the end my friend.

nentwined 23-Apr-20/3:19 PM
definitely spoken.




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