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Insightful Academy (Other) by dinah

Rachel, please, don’t leave without me. Long talks Bright lights Options to replenish Rachel, please, come back and save me. Suddenly, Shuffling through the restless halls Lost my CNS.

Daphne 26-Sep-11/11:04 AM
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