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The Cereal Killer Blues (Lyric) by <{Baba^Yaga}>

In a pea green Fiat I'll save the day While lapping your school with two pints of parfait baby get in, and make it quick Lighting up a Camel, cool zippo flick the side of which plainly states "From the pocket of a killer" You might think you're so 'in crowd' But baby I'm a thriller Cuz I got 29 free ways to kill and a rented rotatiller. * This is my new twelve bar blues song. I would like my friends and peers to finish it for me, and whoever finishes the song the most admirably will share the lyrical rights with me when I record the song this Fall in Venice Beach, California. This is indeed a contest So have fun with it! Lets kill some people! Nuns, politiciancs, Whoever. The next 3 verses are entirely up to the writer's discretion. Yee Haw!

jh99 28-Feb-10/7:31 AM
If I could use an eraser on the first part it would make it better.Do you have any real lyrics offereings or is this a fun game for you ?




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