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Graveyard(Cry of the living) (Free verse) by alvinb

Sorry for not visiting you... I'm so busy I can't be with you... Just wait for me, I'll be there... I'm wanting to see your lovely stare... Wait for me... Wait for me... Be patient... I haven't forgotten you, my love... I'll be with you this afternoon... and be forever with you soon...

Christof 6-Apr-09/6:39 AM
A lovely stare? Lovely forced rhyme, more like it.




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