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In All My Dreams (Free verse) by forsaken

I don't know how to tell you Exactly what it is you do To me I guess I could start By saying how you fixed my heart Before we met it was hollow The past was to hard for me to swollow All it took was a look in your eyes To make that part of me to leave and die So now there's nothing that can hold Me back from keeping yours out of the cold Know I'd do nothing to make yours break To keep it safe I'd do whatever it takes Just as I would do for a single kiss If I was dieing it'd be my final wish As never in my life has anything felt so right You're the only thing I see when I close my eyes at night Oh how I pray for a day where I open them and see That same beautiful sight in the morning beside of me You'd never have to feel lonely again As in all my dreams I'm holding you till the end

SupremeDreamer 30-May-08/12:24 PM
swollow - SWALLOW....FUCK MAN.

Can't you fucking use spellcheck.net? Your writing is fucking gay... even gayer is that you just vote for yourself... you know what? Zero bomb time. I've just fucking had it with morons like you.




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