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Spectrum Of Passion (Free verse) by Mickey Pig Knuckles

The deepest depths of my soul has been reached by few, so few for this is my inner-being that I do not share easily I prefer to reserve the right for anybody to judge my inner-self for the preciseness of my soul which I have striven for so long to grasp it had inflicted error in my reason judgment has waged war against my passion and appetite thus causing my soul to become a battleground of disarray For the appetite of my passion must be fed to continue on my very seemingly endless journey of a fruitful life my passion is the guidance of my ways this passion left unattended without reason will burn it will burn to its own destruction Reason without logical judgment is a force that is self-confining instead of changing or altering the morals or standards of my soul I have focused my preciseness on striving to become my own peacemaker I will turn the elements of myself from discord and rivalry into a oneness with melody I feed the appetite of my passion to its smallest or greatest wants I now have reason and my reason is shrouded with logical judgment through this I have finally obtained the hold on the strict morals of my soul which in turn have become more precise now I no longer live by my soul rather with it my passion through reason in the hopes that my judgment is clear allowing my passion to live through its own daily resurrection!!!!! Penned By Mickey Pig Knuckles

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 15-Jan-08/4:07 PM
Thank you so much for sharing your gift of literature. This is one of the excellentest poemes I have read today and it doesn't matter that it doesn't rhyme because not all poemes have to rhyme you idiot.




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