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Bottle collection (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

All contained something before, during, after, one time or another. A june-bug scotch drunk from the air of another era or someones favorite red decanting itself to the air like the Mistress' spring bouquet. Nickels and dimes, the most they ever had, or a rescue letter never sent.

Paul S 22-Nov-07/5:20 AM
I like this INTRANSIT. you have taken something innocuous and gven it life-- "A june-bug scotch drunk" is a great line. Good work. BTW, it seems like you and skamper are the only ones to comment and vote on this site anymore. Whats up with that?




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