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Parasite (Free verse) by Christof

The fog does not lie on the field Like a shroud or a cold white hand; It rises up, a sweat, a breath, Reminds the train it is not dead, No Charon in a bone-white land But a living fluke at the very least.

Skamper 22-Oct-07/10:13 PM
having recently been amazed by fog in a tropical environment I connect with this...nice!




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