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Soccer (Free verse) by x0lovelylarnx0

The whistle blows to start the game We look into the eyes of the other team I can see that they want to win But we have more hunger than they do I have the ball and I'm drilling the ball towards the net They can't stop me All I can see is the goalie and the big white net I take my foot back and aim My foot finally comes in contact with the ball I watch it soar through the air I hear it hit the net I scored and the crowed went wild I felt a great jolt of energy The energy gave me the power to do it all again Someone pushes me down hard to the ground There is no whistle I'm fired up and angry But I get right back up and begin my chase after the ball all over again Finally the three blows of the whistle I had been waiting for

pete 19-Oct-07/2:16 PM
ahh ... yes; getting there (ps don't mind me ... i was crap at your age too)




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