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A.M. (Free verse) by renwick

How could I forget, Her or Her For the language of love is also the Language of torture Staring at a rose bush as it slowly dies Or a sparrow carrying a cigarette butt back To use in building a nest Pain lies in every passion Although I'd love to I cannot forget

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 16-Sep-02/11:40 AM
YES USING A CIGARETTE BUTT IN A POEME HOW POIGNANT. WHAT DOES IT SAY ABOUT OUR CULTURE AND URBAN LIFE?




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