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The lack of graffiti in an art centre lavatory (Other) by BEBO

Look at this In this place A wide white Un-art-ed space Drunken scribbles All exterminated Make this prose Seem ill fated Either the People Have no graffiti compulsion Or the management Excess white emulsion Please dont paint over My humble words They brighten up This room of turds Maybe then One day The penny will drop Its O.K. To do art As you fart and plop

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 16-Sep-02/11:38 AM
You, Sir, are an insult to the hallowed ranks of poemes making reference to faeces. You use foul words like 'fart' and 'plopp' as if to say "POO IS FUNNY LOOK IT'S GROSS HA HA". Do you have no artistic wision? No sense of the grand and mysterious? If my poemes are the sound of a frantic, frighten'd orchestra (which they are), yours are that of a broken whistle blown by a hobo in a feeble attempt to summon a djinn. Good day.




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