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Nothing to See Here (Rant) (Free verse) by Skamper

I find another rage a fit of pique - quick- clear a space upon the page find release needle-stick injuries welcome I pass – another scribbled idea worn out faded - reprinted so many times I want to vomit fuck this shit I’m over it can’t stand the look upon my own reflection as she nods in my direction - Bitch Yeah take whatever you need feed – suckle from the womb wander - go on I’ll stand back give some room to idle watchers grinning fuckers clever bastards shaking - wank-stained fingers mocking - clocking up the time 'til the blind takes a trip falls – death-trap callings Give me another whine the clock ran away with the time and the subtlety of rhyme is slaughtered fuck me – yeah I said it again – fuck me oops one more time Oh no! I already used that rhyme – never mind I’m sure the skimmer will catch it when the plug is pulled and dreams slip over the scum or - do they slip in the scum hard to tell from this side of hell It all looks much the same- OH! God I just threw up some words - they spell insane call the doctor he can look within me pass the blame on something I ate - Fucking ingrate

INTRANSIT 3-Jul-07/8:17 AM
I see potential beyond the break beat. I'd like to see you work this poem. w/h vote.




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