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You can't send love to a voicemail. (Free verse) by drnick

Sorry I missed your call, you see it wasn’t on purpose. I’ve got a busy schedule now so your calls are all worthless. I would really like to talk, just not with you at the moment. I know you wait for calls back and bury the pain in your stomach. If you want you can call me back with chance of being labeled a creep. Please press one for the voicemail or just wait for the beep.

lmp 21-Jun-07/2:54 PM
grown up version of a pimple?

seriously though, this is better written than that.

think it's time for this person to start leaving excessively long messages with a lot of long silent pauses, heavy sighs, and cheery "talk to you later!"s at the end. oh, and if the message gets cut off for length, call back and continue. fill up her box [one way or another].




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