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A Man Of The World (Free verse) by vulcan

But then Father cried "Breakfast is ready!" So I left the green gate And its fiddling fairy. But when the Priest pointed to the rings And soundlessly parted his lips Just then I knew I'd killed the fairy,the fiddle... And the gate.

pete 13-Sep-02/11:49 PM
sounds like you woke from a nice dream to a nasty reality .... would have worked better for me if fairy fiddle and gate were on separate lines as then killing the gate would have had more impact ..... 4




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