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Same old rancour (a yellow stream of consciousness) (Free verse) by ecargo

Headshots, back slaps, one-track crit hacks tricked out and willing, winning, spinning-- let the games begin! (again?) Pratfallen, upset the poesies genuflecting hectoring, dragging your baggage beside, rag mannered, such a wag. Rattled prattling about oh!so!many!things! jerking and gibbering all over the page (the light, the dying, the drama, rage, rage) Another three-card monty-- atavistic vagrants piddling on the pavement.

richa 15-Jan-07/2:10 PM
I like pratfallen. To fall on one's buttocks. Very apt.




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