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Blue, Black & White (Free verse) by oneglove

Hear the hounds a callin They’re crying out for blood By fire light, their jet black eyes Reveal the scenes in hell Come runnin boy Don’t slow up now Look for me outside of town You and me gonna meet on down highway 61 The fresh face babe is long forgot Behind broken bones and lives That bastard’s passed out cold again He’ll sleep on through the night Smell the air Outside of town That broken man can’t get you now You and me gonna meet on down highway 61 Hear the city singin out It’s lonely and in love It hurts and aches and can’t get to sleep Son, it’s where you belong Grab that six string Hit the ground Start your livin, runnin round You and me gonna meet on down highway 61 That harvest moon is callin Over the amber sea Lost and broken hit the road Your savior’s waitin under me Get out quick And feel the sound The ghosts of heartache gather round You and me find common ground on highway 61

oneglove 3-Nov-06/1:51 PM
By no means do I think you're stupid, I was just trying to clarify what you said. And I agree that it has the meter of a song, but I am no musician so that's why I labeled it a free verse. I hope you take advantage of any blues you find along 61




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