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Soy Flat White with One (Free verse) by helenwales

A Sargasso Sea of innumerable worlds, Floating aboard this paper cup. Lit by the neon glow of the monitor, And a acrid smell so familiar, A life buoy with hard shards sent to ruin it all.  

nypoet22 12-Oct-06/6:22 PM
minor grammar correction: _an_ acrid smell.

otherwise, i like it.




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